Thanks, well the ship is not intended for use in FL, it is just a personal project of mine, on the other hand I am working on one last big ship pack with circa 55 ships mostly fighters. Stay tuned .

Not bad

Can't really critique without seeing the topology. Wireframe overlay plox.

Other than those unnecessary cuts on the blue pieces, it looks pretty clean. My advice would be to bulk up the outer edges of the solar panels. Having an acute angle on a border edge always looks unnatural.

It's also a very large object - you can afford to spend a whole lot more budget on establishing the silhouette. You can make the core round pieces a lot smoother with more splits.

I'd also have to take a closer look a the round bits at the end of the pylons. It MAY just be that the resolution is making them look higher res than they are, but the non-wireframe image suggests otherwise. Try to keep your polygon density uniform.

You guys kissed and made up yet? Sounds like it

Finally done!

I removed all the unwanted slices, bulked all the sharp edges, and added details to the little energy balls.

Behold!

A nice interpretion of a human remake of the Nomad gate. It still shows those human-tech elements they seem to need to create a jumpgate with their limited knowledge, but by its shape it definitively shows it's real origin. Also a great touch are those solar panels. I always wondered where all those tradelane routes and jump gates get all their immense energy from.